On Mother's Day....
Everyone says that My mom is the best in the world. I don't say that. Wont say that ever. I say My mom is the best mom the world will ever see. Neither there has been a better mom in the past. Nor there will be in the future!
Cheers and Don't forget to wish your mom!
To you I owe my existence and all my success
Every thing's for you. Each rupee, every pence
You are the reason I walk, I talk, I think, I see,
You were A mother the second time when I came
And I was the child that I will always want to be
Your extreme parsimony which still amazes me
Parsimony not in love but in hatred & disgust
You blew away my mistakes, all as a puff of smoke
Me being incorrigible but never found lack of love
The invaluable time you spent on me as a mother
I never aim to pay it back coz I never will be able to
Those priceless tears, the never failing love & devotion
They were never unnoticed. I admire you. I love you
You adopted my fears, healed pain & wiped my tears
To me you are the bible of forgiveness. Big and small
Couldn't have asked for more generousness from you
Can never pay you back. Neither I'm capable nor I'll try
To this ordinary child who wouldn't even love you back
The warmth you gave, the way no one ever did and will
The huge sacrifice when you quit on those small things
Those elements of happiness all which you deserved
You are my teacher, my Idol, my encourager, my strength
I wish to shower millions to stop every tear that rolls down
With numb eyes when I look at you thinking about the care
The enduring patience, the treasure of wisdom, my cushion
Being with you for all these years. Those afternoons in your lap
I will miss this when I go away. Wen you set me free from you
When you set me free to chase my dreams. You always have
thought twice. First for me and then for the rest of them
I wish you A Happy Mothers day to express my love back
Which at maximum is zilch as compared to your motherly love.
I read this somewhere: "A mother is a women who pretends like she never was fond of the pie when there are only 4 pie's for 5 people."
its really good man...a bit too melodramic...but fits my taste..
"You adopted my fears, healed pain & wiped my tears
To me you are the bible of forgiveness. Big and small"
for me those were the best lines...
good goin...write more....
To this ordinary child who wouldn't even love you back ????
true tht v wont b able to repay anything tht mom gave us but still v all love our moms. isnt it?
n i can bet my bottom dollar tht everyone wud say tht his mom is 'THE BEST' :)
cheers
http://virajgupta.blogspot.com/
these lines are the best....
[i]You blew away my mistakes, all as a puff of smoke
Me being incorrigible but never found lack of love
The invaluable time you spent on me as a mother
I never aim to pay it back coz I never will be able to
keep it up :)
Cheers!
@Viraj: well this line "To this ordinary child who wouldn't even love you back" refers to the way in which my love was a penny as compared to billions of love portions that I got :)
And yea I toldcha "Everyone says that My mom is the best in the world. I don't say that. Wont say that ever. I say My mom is the best mom the world will ever see. Neither there has been a better mom in the past. Nor there will be in the future!"
Cheers!
@Sourav: Thanks man! Thanks a ton
Cheers!
Whoa three cheers :P
Cheers
Tee
Brilliant!! :)
Did you show it to your mom? Or is it just for the blog??
happy mothers day to all loving mother
check this one too : its not a poem ., but just a wish !!
http://mohanitguy.blogspot.com/2008/05/happy-mothers-day.html
if u wish...u san take a luk at my oder posts too...god bless u n yer mum 4 bringin u up so well....
and thanks for the comment you left me!
waah meri jaan!!! kudos
I love it, nd m sure tune aunty ko ye dikhaya hoga:)
She'll b very proud of u...
keep it up.
cheers!!!
AJ
but very emotional....at times anyway...
Something wrong?
Anyway thanks for hitting up my site.
Cheers!
www.joshuahaywood.ca
Shit!!
Mum is the best word and the most perfect creation of God!
You expressed it so beautifully and the thought that I most loved was, that you don't even want to pay her back, because we are actually not capable of doing that. :)
Love the poem about your mother!
I love my mom very much, unfortunatly i can't show her this (she doesn't speak english).
Well, i still can translate it but it will sound really weird in arabic ^^ lol.
Anyway, you're good!
loubna
dats a nice one..keep blogging
no seriously.. i dont mean that u r 'hard' or sumtng!! but generally.. i feel mom is one person for whom one can never ever express feelings in its entirity... one falls in love with every facet of hers.. so much so that its difficlt to describe ur feelings for her..
but u out ur feelings brilliantly to words.. it has that child-like charm and warmth..
ohh.. i love u mom!
btw, i luvd these lines:
"With numb eyes when I look at you thinking about the care
The enduring patience, the treasure of wisdom, my cushion
Being with you for all these years. Those afternoons in your lap
I will miss this when I go away. Wen you set me free from you"
i liked the poem,but a lil too omg,MOMMMA! for me.getty getty?
Very well written.
You love your mama , there's still hope for you yet, cherry !
Cheers.
My favourite part is "A mother is a woman who pretends she was never fond of the pie when......"
Really good words, mate ! So true about mothers !
Lovely read. and thank you for visiting, hope to see you back =)
That quote opened my eyes even more to the sacrifices my mom made through the years!
best wishes.
Visit MAN IN PAINTING when you get time.
U already have a tower of comments..nothin left for me to say...
Keep writing..
Cheers..!!
Arjun
May be it is the best write up in this blog which I truly enjoyed.
Thanks for composing it!
relating tears to mothers!!
Its not about me shedding tears coz of my mom..Its the mothers who shed tears..and its after all not written to be taken in the literal sense but has to be taken in the emotional point of view :)
thanks!
@ sandeep..thanks man!
Tu bhi koi best se kam thodi hai
http://www.wifemotherlover.com
We all feel the same for our mothers but to put that down to words in this manner is something I've never read before..
I'll link your blog to mine shortly!
hats off to u
cant imagine writing one like that
good
too happy for this
btw congrats for the half century of comments for this post
you know i had been wondering for sometime that the generation of our mothers are that of super-moms!
they perfectly love/cuddle/nourishes/cares/nurse us and everything else as well, mash-Allah.
women of my/our generation are not good mothers, ch.
we're luckier.
i thoroughly enjoyed the poem and else.
ps. tell me how to get rid of the word verification?
I think what you wrote is something that all of us know and feel in our heart of heart but somehow never end up letting our Mums know..
Did you read it out to her? I would love to know how she reacted!!!
she is the representative of god on earth...!!!
"A mother is a women who pretends like she never was fond of the pie when there are only 4 pie's for 5 people."
I like your blog Mr. Numb !